First storyboarding ideas for our final treatment

We all came up with some ideas afor our first storyboarding. We decided to locate it on school grounds to emphasize that she is isolated in a busy environment. We decided to start of with a tracking shot of a clock that would zoom out to a shot of our character sitting down in a classroom with her work out, the shot then changes to a over the shoulder shot of her writing. The fourth shot is a close up of her fidgeting with her hands to show she is stressed, we then decided on having a extreme close up of her staring at her watch. A high angled shot to show her looking down at her exam timetable to a close up of her timetable. We then chose to do a close up of her facial expressions looking nervous and stressed out, this shot then changes to a close up of a alarm display on her mobile phone reminding her of her exam. There's then a mid shot of her putting her headphones on to a close up of her hands, packing away her things to a longshot of her going through the door to the corridor. When she is outside in the corridor there is a high angled shot of her standing whilst she has her headphones in. Whilst she is standing in main focus everything around her (school children) is blurred. There is then a intercut between her music and the ticking sound of the clock in her mind. When the corridor is empty there is a longshot of her walking, as she gets to the end of the corridor there is a back view of her walking. There is then a over the shoulder shot of her looking into the classroom to a view from inside the classroom of her looking in. Lastly we decided to have a tracking shot of her walking into the classroom and sitting down with the clock in view, we then end with a close up of the clock and everything else out of focus.